diff --git a/release-packaging/HelpSource/Classes/FluidBufAmpSlice.schelp b/release-packaging/HelpSource/Classes/FluidBufAmpSlice.schelp
index 35031d6..742ea7e 100644
--- a/release-packaging/HelpSource/Classes/FluidBufAmpSlice.schelp
+++ b/release-packaging/HelpSource/Classes/FluidBufAmpSlice.schelp
@@ -171,19 +171,22 @@ c = Buffer.new(s);
 FluidBufAmpSlice.process(s,b,indices:c, absRampUp:2205, absRampDown:2205, absThreshOn:-70, absThreshOff: -80, relRampUp:10, relRampDown:441, relThreshOn:14, relThreshOff:12, minSliceLength:4410)
 c.query
 c.getn(0,c.numFrames*2,{|item|item.postln;})
+//reformatting to read the onsets and offsets as pairs
+c.getn(0,c.numFrames*2,{|items|items.reshape(c.numFrames,2).do({|x| x.postln});})
 
-//loops over a splice with the MouseX
+//loops over a splice with the MouseX, taking the respective onset and offset of a given slice
 (
 {
 	BufRd.ar(1, b,
 		Phasor.ar(0,1,
-			BufRd.kr(1, c,
-				MouseX.kr(0, BufFrames.kr(c) - 1), 0, 1),
-			BufRd.kr(1, c,
-				MouseX.kr(1, BufFrames.kr(c)), 0, 1),
-			BufRd.kr(1,c,
-				MouseX.kr(0, BufFrames.kr(c) - 1), 0, 1)), 0, 1);
-		}.play;
+			BufRd.kr(2, c,
+				MouseX.kr(0, BufFrames.kr(c)), 0, 1)[0],
+			BufRd.kr(2, c,
+				MouseX.kr(1, BufFrames.kr(c)), 0, 1)[1],
+			BufRd.kr(2,c,
+				MouseX.kr(0, BufFrames.kr(c)), 0, 1)[0]
+	), 0, 1);
+}.play;
 )
 ::
 
@@ -209,6 +212,6 @@ Routine{
 }.play
 )
 
-// list the indicies of detected attacks - the two input channels have been summed
-c.getn(0,c.numFrames,{|item|item.postln;})
+// list the indicies of detected attacks - the two input channels have been summed. The two channels of the output, respectively onset and offset indices, are interleaved as this is the SuperCollider buffer data formatting
+c.getn(0,c.numFrames*2,{|item|item.postln;})
 ::